What is your dream home?

2021-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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My dream house has a swimming pool and comfortable. I think better I live in a apartment than live in a house. Because the big house is dizzing. It is just like maze.

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My dream house has a swimming pool and comfortable.
>> My dream house would have a swimming pool and would be a comfortable house.

I think better I live in a apartment than live in a house.
>> I think it\'s better to live in an apartment than a house.

Because the big house is dizzing.
>> Because a big house can be dizzying. 

It is just like maze.
>> It is just like a maze.

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