What is your dream house?
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What is your dream house?
I want to live in apartment. I want to have four rooms and two bathrooms. The one is a bed room. one of them is a dress room. I really want to get dress room. now I can\'t wear black clothes. Because my cat\'s fur sticks to my clothes. If i have independence space for clothes, I could wear diverse colors. I want to place computer in other room. I\'ll invite people to play computer game in my game room. the last room is for my cats and I need a balcony for my cats. It will be cat\'s bathroom.
the last one i want is a spacious living room. I want a big TV screen like movie theater\'s. There is a table for six behind the sofa to watch TV while studying something.
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Good day, Ava!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
What is your dream house?
I want to live in apartment.
I want to live in apartment.
>> I want to live in an apartment.
I want to have four rooms and two bathrooms.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I want to have an apartment with 4 rooms and 2 bathrooms.
The one is a bed room.
>> The first room is a bedroom, and the other one is a dressing room.
one of them is a dress room.
>> The first room is a bedroom, and the other one is a dressing room.
I really want to get dress room.
>> I really want to have a dressing room.
now I can\'t wear black clothes.
>> I cant wear black clothes, because cat\'s fur sticks to my clothes
Because my cat\'s fur sticks to my clothes.
>> I cant wear black clothes, because cat\'s fur sticks to my clothes
If i have independence space for clothes, I could wear diverse colors.
>> If I have enough space for my clothes, I could wear different colors.
I want to place computer in other room.
>> I want to place my computer in another room.
I\'ll invite people to play computer game in my game room.
>> I\'ll invite people to play computer games with me in my game room.
the last room is for my cats and I need a balcony for my cats.
>> The last room is for my cats, and I need a balcony for my cats. ( be careful with the capitalization. :) )
It will be cat\'s bathroom.
>> It will be my cat\'s potty place.
the last one i want is a spacious living room.
>> I want to have a spacious living room.
I want a big TV screen like movie theater\'s.
>> CORRECT!
There is a table for six behind the sofa to watch TV while studying something.
>> CORRECT!
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