What is your dream house?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I live in Korea, I would want a new big apartment. However, I live in Canada now so I want a house. My dream house is a big two-stories house with a small garden and a garage in Canada. I really like gardening so I want to growing some vegetables and flowers in my garden. Moreover, I’d like to have a barbecue with my family and friends by eating with vegetables that I grow up by myself in my garden on some sunshine day. I also want to drink a cup of coffee by looking at my garden in the morning. I will decorate my house modern with new fabulous furnitures. There are a living room and kitchen on the first floor and rooms on the second floor. I’d like to decorate a room in the basement that my family can enjoy hobbies like watching movies, playing table tennis and working out. I’m so happy just thinking about it.
1. Why did you miss the boat yesterday?
2. If you don\'t want to miss the boat tomorrow, you have to go to bed early tonight.
3. I shouldn\'t have missed the boat.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Great choice of design. I think that would be a perfect place to live in.
If I live in Korea, I would want a new big apartment.
>> If I live in South Korea, I would want a new and big apartment.
However, I live in Canada now so I want a house.
>> CORRECT
My dream house is a big two-stories house with a small garden and a garage in Canada.
>> CORRECT
I really like gardening so I want to growing some vegetables and flowers in my garden.
>> I really like gardening so I want to grow some vegetables and flowers in my garden.
Moreover, I’d like to have a barbecue with my family and friends by eating with vegetables that I grow up by myself in my garden on some sunshine day.
>> Moreover, I’d like to have a barbecue with my family and friends by eating vegetables that I grew up by myself in my garden on some sunshine day.
I also want to drink a cup of coffee by looking at my garden in the morning.
>> CORRECT
I will decorate my house modern with new fabulous furnitures.
>> I will decorate my house modern with new and fabulous furniture.
There are a living room and kitchen on the first floor and rooms on the second floor.
>> The living room and kitchen should be on the first floor and the other rooms should be on the second floor.
I’d like to decorate a room in the basement that my family can enjoy hobbies like watching movies, playing table tennis and working out.
>> I’d like to decorate a room in the basement wherein my family can enjoy hobbies like watching movies, playing table tennis and working out.
I’m so happy just thinking about it.
>> CORRECT
1. Why did you miss the boat yesterday?
>> CORRECT
2. If you don\'t want to miss the boat tomorrow, you have to go to bed early tonight.
>> CORRECT
3. I shouldn\'t have missed the boat.
3. I shouldn\'t have missed the boat.
>> CORRECT
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