What is your dream house and where do you want it to be?

2022-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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My dream house is having a yard and a basketball post. And the place is Incheon. Because Incheon is near the international airport. Especially, Songdo of Incheon is called by city of the future. So I want to live there and make a living.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

Yes, everything needs to be suitable in terms of your living conditions. We have to think about our jobs as well.

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My dream house is having a yard and a basketball post.

>> My dream house has a yard and a basketball post in it.

And the place is Incheon. Because Incheon is near the international airport.

>> That place should be in Incheon because it is near the international airport.

Especially, Songdo of Incheon is called by city of the future.

>> Especially, it is called the \"Songdo of Incheon\" or \"City of the future\" so I want to live there and make a living.

So I want to live there and make a living.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

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