What is your dream house and where do you want it to be?
학생이 쓴 원문
My dream house is very large and high-quality apartment.
Of course I want to get my own house, but there is a risk of thieves.
And I need to pay a lot of money for owning my house, and also I can\'t enjoy some convenient systems in the apartments.
Because of these reasons, I want to live in the apartment.
But I want big and great one.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Yes, we need to consider a lot of things before getting our own house or apartment. It should be suitable to our way of living. :)
My dream house is very large and high-quality apartment.
>> CORRECT
Of course I want to get my own house, but there is a risk of thieves.
>> Of course I want to get my own house, but there is a risk of thieves.
And I need to pay a lot of money for owning my house, and also I can\'t enjoy some convenient systems in the apartments.
>>I need to pay a lot of money if I own a house. I also can\'t enjoy some convenient systems in the apartments.
Because of these reasons, I want to live in the apartment.
>>Because of these reasons, I want to live in an apartment but I want it to be a big and great one.
But I want big and great one.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
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