What is your dream in life?
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your dream in life?
I haven't thought about my dream in life, recently.
Maybe threre are some reasons, I think.
first, I am already over in the mid-fourty
and I have family members to look for.
besides, It's almost to impossible to change my present job.
In conclusion, I want to be a happy co-worker, a nice father and a good husband.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for spending your time doing your homework.
Your effort is much appreciated :))
I\'m also glad for sharing your dreams with me.
Have a great day ahead!
__T.Myra (\")(^^,)
I haven\'t thought about my dream in life, recently.
>>CORRECT
OR>> These days, I haven\'t thought about my dreams in life.
Maybe there are some reasons, I think.
>> Maybe there are some reasons why.
first, I am already over in the mid-fourty.
>>First, I am already in my mid-forties.
and I have family members to look for.
>> CORRECT
OR>> I have my family to think and care for.
besides, It\'s almost to impossible to change my present job.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Besides, it\'s not possible to change my career.
In conclusion, I want to be a happy co-worker, a nice father and a good husband.
>> In conclusion, I want to be a happy employee, a kind father and a good husband.(Nice is not suitable to describe someone because it\'s too vague)
Thank you for spending your time doing your homework.
Your effort is much appreciated :))
I\'m also glad for sharing your dreams with me.
Have a great day ahead!
__T.Myra (\")(^^,)
I haven\'t thought about my dream in life, recently.
>>CORRECT
OR>> These days, I haven\'t thought about my dreams in life.
Maybe there are some reasons, I think.
>> Maybe there are some reasons why.
first, I am already over in the mid-fourty.
>>First, I am already in my mid-forties.
and I have family members to look for.
>> CORRECT
OR>> I have my family to think and care for.
besides, It\'s almost to impossible to change my present job.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Besides, it\'s not possible to change my career.
In conclusion, I want to be a happy co-worker, a nice father and a good husband.
>> In conclusion, I want to be a happy employee, a kind father and a good husband.(Nice is not suitable to describe someone because it\'s too vague)
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