What is your dream profession?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually don\'t think about my dream profession. However I am thinking to be a teacher. The reason why I want to be a teacher is that first, lots of people says that this job will still remain in the future. So, I think it is good to be teacher when I grow up. Secondly, I really like when I share my knowledge to another person. It means that I like to teach someone and share good information with people. Even though I cannot be a teacher, I will find another job !!
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Sheila :)
>>I don\'t usually think about my dream profession.
However I am thinking to be a teacher.
>>CORRECT
OR>>However, I am thinking to be a teacher.
The reason why I want to be a teacher is that first, lots of people says that this job will still remain in the future.
>>The reason why I want to be a teacher is that, first, lots of people say that this job will still remain in the future.
So, I think it is good to be teacher when I grow up.
>>So, I think it is good to be a teacher when I grow up.
Secondly, I really like when I share my knowledge to another person.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Secondly, I really like when I share my knowledge to other people.
It means that I like to teach someone and share good information with people.
>>CORRECT
Even though I cannot be a teacher, I will find another job !!
>>CORRECT
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