What is your dream summer vacation?
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Absolutely, I want to travel Hawaii and Santorini in Greece with my. There are my dream and wedding places for my vacation. Especially, Santorini. I really want to go there because I heard it for the first time from my crush. I still remember that was the very moment when She said \"If I can have an opportunity to go abroad for a honeymoon, I want to leave for Santorini.\" It has caught my heart by now. :)
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Remember that you can do anything you want. You are smart, and I know you will have a great future. You did great today, Elic! I\'m always here for you.
Absolutely, I want to travel Hawaii and Santorini in Greece with my.
>>> Absolutely. I want to travel to Hawaii and Santorini in Greece with my girlfriend.
There are my dream and wedding places for my vacation.
>>> CORRECT.
Especially, Santorini. I really want to go there because I heard it for the first time from my crush.
>>> Especially, Santorini. I really want to go there because I heard about it for the first time from my crush.
I still remember that was the very moment when She said \"If I can have an opportunity to go abroad for a honeymoon, I want to leave for Santorini.\"
>>> I still remember that was the very moment when She said, \"If I can have an opportunity to go abroad for a honeymoon, I want to leave for Santorini.\"
It has caught my heart by now.
>>> CORRECT.
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