What is your dream vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your dream vacation?
I will stay at honme and play computer game
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear!
I\'m grateful that you made your homework.
However, I\'d like to encourage you to make your answer longer since it is s composition making homework.
You can add your reasons why you\'d like to have that kind of vacation.
You can also cite some examples to support your answer.
I hope to see a real composition next time. I know you can do that.
~Teacher Shanee
What is your dream vacation?I will stay at honme and play computer game
>>I will stay at home and play computer games.
>>OR: I will stay at home and a play computer game.
>>Or: My dream vacation is spending my whole time playing computer games at home.
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