What is your dreamjob?

2024-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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My dreamjob is Baseball player and Cheif. Beacause I do Baseball player, I can have many moneys. And Cheif I can have many moneys too. And I want to do to UDTs. But going UDT is not a dreamjob. My dreamjob is Baseball player and Cheif.

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~ T. Camille

My dreamjob is Baseball player and Cheif.

>> My dream jobs are to be a Baseball player and a Chief.

Beacause I do Baseball player, I can have many moneys.

>> If I become a baseball player, I can have many money.

OR >> If I become a baseball player, I can earn a lot of money.

And Cheif I can have many moneys too.

>> I can have many money too, when I become a chief.

And I want to do to UDTs.

>> I also want to do to UDTs.

But going UDT is not a dreamjob.

>> But going to the UDT is not a dream job.

My dreamjob is Baseball player and Cheif.

>> My dream is to become a baseball player or a chief.

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