What is your favorite alcoholic drink?

2020-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Dear [Name], I like a beer and I enjoy Korea brend \"Cas from Dusan Bears.\" I feel cool from this brand. In Korea, A lot of people eat and drink with chicken & beer. As I know, many foreigener like this style of food & drink.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework.

Here are your corrections:

Dear [Name],

I like a beer and I enjoy Korea brend \"Cas from Dusan Bears.\"

>> I like beer and I enjoy Korea\'s beer \"Cas from Dusan Bears\".

I feel cool from this brand.

>> CORRECT

In Korea, A lot of people eat and drink with chicken & beer.

>> CORRECT

As I know, many foreigener like this style of food & drink

>> As far as I know, may foreigners like this style of food and drink.

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