What is your favorite all-time game?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite video game is soccer game.
It\'s \"Winning Eleven\" made by Konami in Japan game maker.
I have played this game for over 21 years.
I\'m still member of game club.
So we are talking many time through online or offline.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
WOW! You are one of the pioneers in the gaming world. Thank you for sharing your favorite game.
~Kelly^^
My favorite video game is soccer game.
>> Correct
It\'s \"Winning Eleven\" made by Konami in Japan game maker.
>> It\'s \"Winning Eleven\" made by Konami, a Japanese game maker.
I have played this game for over 21 years.
>> Correct
I\'m still member of game club.
>> I\'m still member of the game club.
So we are talking many time through online or offline.
>> So we talk many times online and offline.
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