What is your favorite animal and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like horses among animals.
Among the pictures I drew, there is an horse.
There are two horses I am preparing to draw.
The horse\'s eyes are good, beautiful, and gentle.
The horse is an old saying that means family.
There is an island in Korea called Jeju Island,
and I have experience riding horses on a ranch there.
It was scary, but the gentle words drove me well.
It is peaceful to see the horses in the field.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for telling about horse. They are indeed fascinating creatures. I am excited to see your paintings when they\'re done!~~T.Dee
>>I like horses among other animals.
Among the pictures I drew, there is an horse.
Among the pictures I drew, there is an horse.
>>Among all the pictures I drew, there is a horse.
There are two horses I am preparing to draw.
There are two horses I am preparing to draw.
>>CORRECT!
The horse\'s eyes are good, beautiful, and gentle.
The horse\'s eyes are good, beautiful, and gentle.
>>CORRECT!
The horse is an old saying that means family.
The horse is an old saying that means family.
>>There is an old saying that says that a horse is family.
There is an island in Korea called Jeju Island, and I have experience riding horses on a ranch there.
There is an island in Korea called Jeju Island, and I have experience riding horses on a ranch there.
>>CORRECT!
It was scary, but the gentle words drove me well.
It was scary, but the gentle words drove me well.
>>It was scary, but with gentle words the horse behaved well.
It is peaceful to see the horses in the field.
It is peaceful to see the horses in the field.
>>CORRECT!
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