What is your favorite book? and Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite book is the Great Expectations written by Charles Dickens. This novel is a story about an orphan boy raised by cousin; sister and her husband, It has a great lesson which is what is the real nobility of human. It is neither money nor status for being a good person.
The main character realize it through doing mistakes during his life. I met this novel first time when I was 11 years old. In that time, I enjoyed reading and collected classic novels. Charles Dickens wrote novels with a classy humor which is that I like. Of course, there are many lessons that I have to learn while I growing up. Whenever I read the Great Expectation, I am moved and think about how should I live .
강사 첨삭
Hello Young Won!
Charles Dickins is one of the most prolific English writers and my mother\'s favorite as well. The most famous books he wrote are: A Tale of Two Cities, A Christmas Carol, and Oliver Twist.
Great Expectations is one I have not read yet but because of you, I may start reading this novel soon.
Thank you so much for sharing your favorite book and story.
Have a great weekend!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
The main character realize it through doing mistakes during his life. I met this novel first time when I was 11 years old. In that time, I enjoyed reading and collected classic novels.
This novel is a story about an orphan boy raised by cousin; sister and her husband, It has a great lesson which is what is the real nobility of human.
>> Correct!
Or: ...husband. It has a great lesson... (period not comma)
It is neither money nor status for being a good person.
>> Correct!
The main character realize it through doing mistakes during his life. I met this novel first time when I was 11 years old. In that time, I enjoyed reading and collected classic novels.
>> The main character realized it through doing mistakes during his life. I met this novel first time when I was 11 years old. That time, I enjoyed reading and collecting classic novels.
Charles Dickens wrote novels with a classy humor which is that I like.
>> Charles Dickens wrote novels with classy humor which I like.
Of course, there are many lessons that I have to learn while I growing up.
>> Of course, there are many lessons that I have to learn while I\'m growing up.
Whenever I read the Great Expectation, I am moved and think about how should I live .
>> Correct!
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