What is your favorite book, and why should people read it?

2015-12-31 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I used to read novels when I was in school. As I grow up, my taste on the books have changed to read essays or non-fiction books. After starting my professional career, I became more interested in building a fortune and developing career such as how to be a good leader, coaching skills, and so on. I have recently read Bible for Professional Consultant. The book is about how to prepare and become a professional consultant to help enterprises grow business. Although it wasn’t thorough enough to analyze the current job market and to explain what a professional consultant does in details, I could get a glimpse of his/her job. The author emphasizes that as an employee we can’t stay at the job as long as we want. Rather, employees are forced to leave their companies much earlier than before and think about what to do after retirement or being laid off. One of the jobs that can guarantee a marginal income and job security is to run my own business as a consultant who has field experience.

강사 첨삭

Good evening Sir [이름]!

Happy New Year!

I suddenly want to read books about businesses.

You are right. Running your own business is great.

There are a lot of things to consider. I guess we can talk more about this in our classes.

What type of business would you recommend that has a low capital but high return of investment?

I am excited to hear your pieces of advice. ^^

I hope that you\'ll have a wonderful year ahead of you.

Teacher Nina


I used to read novels when I was in school.

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As I grow up, my taste on the books have changed to read essays or non-fiction books.

>> CORRECT

After starting my professional career, I became more interested in building a fortune and developing career such as how to be a good leader, coaching skills, and so on.

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I have recently read Bible for Professional Consultant.

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The book is about how to prepare and become a professional consultant to help enterprises grow business.

>> CORRECT

Although it wasn’t thorough enough to analyze the current job market and to explain what a professional consultant does in details, I could get a glimpse of his/her job.

>> CORRECT

The author emphasizes that as an employee we can’t stay at the job as long as we want.

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Rather, employees are forced to leave their companies much earlier than before and think about what to do after retirement or being laid off.

>> CORRECT

One of the jobs that can guarantee a marginal income and job security is to run my own business as a consultant who has field experience.

>> CORRECT

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