What is your favorite book or movie?
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Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your favorite movie. I also like that movie. It makes me believe in forever love.^^ Anyway, let\'s talk more about your other favorites in class. Have a good day! See you~
~Kelly^^
I want to talk about notebook which is my favorite movie.
>> Correct.
>> I want to talk about Notebook which is my favorite movie.
>> or: I want to talk about my favorite movie which is The Notebook.
here are two reasones why I like the movie.
>> Correct.
The first reason is that I like romance genre and I could see how much they loved each other. It made my heart flutter.
>> Correct.
The second reason is that there is a couple, and they have some problems, but they resolved that.
>> The second reason is that, I like the couple\'s story, and how they resolved their problems.
Then, I could feel lighthearted mood.
>> It gives me a lighthearted mood.
So, Notebook is my favorite movie for some reasons.
>> So, The Notebook is my favorite movie for some reasons.
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