What is your favorite childhood game and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I play with my son, we use to use Nintendo game machine.
I bought it last year to use when having fun at home with my family.
There are many kinds of games.
We can choose the type of game and set the difficulty level.
My son plays the games better than me.
So he often wins battles with me.
He looks very happy when he wins the game with me.
You can\'t believe it, I did my best.
When we start the game, we usually play for over an hour.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jennifer! :)
Classic childhood games are timeless for a reason. Not only are they simple to grasp and fun to play, they also teach social skills and can enrich the lives of the young players. I t is because of this that many parents will often look to pass on their favorite childhood games to their offspring.
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When I play with my son, we use to use Nintendo game machine.
>> Me and my son used to play using a Nintendo gaming console.
I bought it last year to use when having fun at home with my family.
>>I bought it last year so that me and my family can have fun playing it.
There are many kinds of games.
>> CORRECT
We can choose the type of game and set the difficulty level.
>> CORRECT
My son plays the games better than me.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE BELOW
So he often wins battles with me.
>> My son plays the games better than me so he often wins against me.
He looks very happy when he wins the game with me.
>> He looks very happy when he wins the game against me
You can\'t believe it, I did my best.
>> CORRECT
When we start the game, we usually play for over an hour.
>> CORRECT
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