What is your favorite childhood memory?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would have to say it\'s a time when I played a basketball with my friends during lunch break time. I used to do it, but not anymore. Because each other have lived in another area, also I don\'t have a basketball. :( They reason why I choose is that not only I didn\'t have worry about anything else at that time, but also hanging out with friends was fun and a worth. :)
강사 첨삭
Great day to you, Elic! Here\'s come another day to learn, practice, and rehearse. Learning is your super power. Remember to never stop trying. I am always here for you. Take care and enjoy the rest of the day. ^^
I would have to say it\'s a time when I played a basketball with my friends during lunch break time.
>> I would have to say, it\'s the time when I played basketball with my friends during our lunch break.
I used to do it, but not anymore. Because each other have lived in another area, also I don\'t have a basketball.
>> I used to do it before but now, not anymore because we now live far from each other and also, I don\'t have a ball.
They reason why I choose is that not only I didn\'t have worry about anything else at that time, but also hanging out with friends was fun and a worth. :)
>> The reason why I chose that childhood memory is because at that time, I didn\'t worry about anything else and I got to hang out and have fun with my friends. It was worth it. :)
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.