What is your favorite color and why?

2019-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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I like sky blue, because it is a refreshing color. Since early years I was fond of blue, but some girls asked me, ‘Why do you like blue? It is a boy’s color.’ Even in that time I notice it is weird. On the contrary to this, I hate pink before, because it feels like the demand of being girlish. But for now, I think I don’t need to hate the color. The color is just a matter of preference. And pink is very good on my skin tone.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^

Appreciate you efforts all the time :)

Keep it up...\\m/...

T. Lainey <\",)))><

I like sky blue, because it is a refreshing color.

>>> correct

Since early years I was fond of blue, but some girls asked me, ‘Why do you like blue? It is a boy’s color.’

>>> correct

Even in that time I notice it is weird.

>>> correct

On the contrary to this, I hate pink before, because it feels like the demand of being girlish.

>>> On the contrary, I hate pink before because it feels like it is a demand of being girlish.

But for now, I think I don’t need to hate the color.

>>> correct

The color is just a matter of preference.

>>> correct

And pink is very good on my skin tone.

>>> correct

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