What is your favorite commercial?
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My favorite advertisement is a mobile game commercial which is the King of performance (It is not sure its name.). Anyway, this advertisement is for ten minutes and a lot of famous movie stars star in that. Additionally, the story is very interesting and fun. Although I don\'t like play computer and mobile games, I enjoy watching this commercial. So, sometimes I look for that through Youtube .
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Hello [이름]!
This is a very long and interesting commercial. If I have time, I will check it out on YouTube. I never thought a 10-minute commercial can be so much fun.
Thanks for answering the homework question for today.
See you in class soon!
-T. Donna =)
>>My favorite advertisement is a mobile game commercial which is the King of performance (I am not sure of its name.).
Anyway, this advertisement is for ten minutes and a lot of famous movie stars star in that.
>>Anyway, this advertisement is for ten minutes and a lot of famous movie stars are in it.
Additionally, the story is very interesting and fun.
>> Correct!
Although I don\'t like play computer and mobile games, I enjoy watching this commercial.
>> Although I don\'t like playing computer and mobile games, I enjoy watching this commercial.
So, sometimes I look for that through Youtube .
>> Correct!
Or: YouTube
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