What is your favorite day and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite day is Children\'s day.
Beacause it\'s fun.
And it\'s exiting.
And we by some toys.
And I like Children\'s day, it\'s fun.
강사 첨삭
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HOMEWORK:
My favorite day is Children\'s day.
Beacause it\'s fun.
And it\'s exiting.
And we by some toys.
And I like Children\'s day, it\'s fun.
Beacause it\'s fun.
And it\'s exiting.
And we by some toys.
And I like Children\'s day, it\'s fun.
>> My favorite day is Children\'s day because it\'s fun and exciting. We also buy some toys so I like Children\'s day.
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