What is your favorite dessert?
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My favorite dessert is a chocolate!
I like almost every kinds of chocolate.
These days, I like the green tea chocolate the most.
My friend bought green tea kitkat chocolates for me from Japan.
I was so happy when I tried these.
But, it contains a lot of calories.. So I try to decrease the amount of trying chocolates.
Delicious food is not only delicious but also has high-calories.
It is sad news.
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Hi Nicole!
I like almost every kinds of chocolate.
These days, I like the green tea chocolate the most.
My friend bought green tea KitKat chocolates for me from Japan.
I was so happy when I tried these.
But, it contains a lot of calories.. So I try to decrease the amount of trying chocolates.
It is sad news.
Chocolates are really good for dessert.
I have a chocolate jar in my room, so I eat a piece or two every after dinner.
Its sweetness is perfect to cleanse your palette.
Andrea
My favorite dessert is a chocolate!
>> Correct
I like almost every kinds of chocolate.
>> I like almost all kind of chocolate.
These days, I like the green tea chocolate the most.
>> Correct
My friend bought green tea KitKat chocolates for me from Japan.
>> My friend bought me green tea KitKat chocolates for me from Japan.
I was so happy when I tried these.
>> Correct
But, it contains a lot of calories.. So I try to decrease the amount of trying chocolates.
>>But it contains a lot of calories, so I try to lessen my chocolate consumption.
Delicious food is not only delicious but also has high-calories.
>> Delicious food is not only delicious but also contains high calories.
It is sad news.
>>It is a sad news.
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