What is your favorite drink? Is there a special memory or story behind it?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite drink is wine. Among them I like white wine and the varity is Sauvignon blanc by New zealand
I want to visit to the winery in New zwaland somday. I sometimes drink wine with the meals
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! Thank you for sharing your top drink choice!^^I hope you\'ll have one today and enjoy the rest of your Monday!
~T. Jewel
My favorite drink is wine.
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>>Wine is my favorite drink.
>>Wine is my favorite drink.
Among them I like white wine and the varity is Sauvignon blanc by New zealand
>>Among them, I like white wine, and the variety I prefer is Sauvignon Blanc from New Zealand.
I want to visit to the winery in New zwaland somday.
>>I want to visit a winery in New Zealand someday.
I sometimes drink wine with the meals
>>I sometimes drink wine with meals.
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