What is your favorite English movie and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite English movie is Avengers: Endgame because I like heroes movies. They protect the world and do their best to make us live in better place. When I watch a hero movie, I get power to live more hard. It is the reason why I like heroes movies. Of course, these are fiction movies, but through these, I can think about the world\'s future. I can have my head in the cloud. Sometimes, due to these thoughts, I think about so many things. It doesn\'t make me concentrate on my tasks, but when I think about useless things, I can get rid of thoughts about them.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kimberly:)
That\'s my favorite too! Marvel movies are the best. They make us feel so much emotions and they are very inspiring as well.
My favorite English movie is Avengers: Endgame because I like heroes movies.
>> My favorite English movie is the \"Avengers: Endgame\" because I like heroes movies.
They protect the world and do their best to make us live in better place.
>> CORRECT
When I watch a hero movie, I get power to live more hard.
>> When I watch a hero movie, it motivates me to live harder.
It is the reason why I like heroes movies.
>> It is the reason why I like hero movies.
Of course, these are fiction movies, but through these, I can think about the world\'s future.
>> CORRECT
I can have my head in the cloud.
>> It feels like my head is on the clouds.
Sometimes, due to these thoughts, I think about so many things.
>> CORRECT
It doesn\'t make me concentrate on my tasks, but when I think about useless things, I can get rid of thoughts about them.
>> CORRECT
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