What is your favorite English movie and why?

2022-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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My favorite English movie is the Pirates of the Caribbean. I loved this movie when I was young. Johnny Depp, Orland Bloom, Keira Nightly and Chow Yun-bal so on, cool actors came out there. But It would have been nice if It ended in part 3........

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic:)

Most people say that it\'s a great movie but I haven\'t personally watched it myself. I\'ll try to watch it and share you my experience. :)

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My favorite English movie is the Pirates of the Caribbean.

>> My favorite English movie is \" The Pirates of the Caribbean\".

I loved this movie when I was young.

>> CORRECT

Johnny Depp, Orland Bloom, Keira Nightly and Chow Yun-bal so on, cool actors came out there.

>> Johnny Depp, Orland Bloom, Keira Nightly and Chow Yun-bal are the cool actors there.

But It would have been nice if It ended in part 3.

>> It would have been nice if it ended in part 3.

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