What is your favorite English movie and why?

2022-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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My favorite Hollywood English movie series is \'Batman:Dark Knight\' series. I like dark hero movies, and especially I like the movies like Batman series. I can think about a lot of things by watching those dark hero movies, and I also like the dark mood of those movies. And also I like the movie director of \'Batman:Dark Knight\' series. That\'s why my favorite Hollywood English movie series is \'Batman:Dark Knight\' series.

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My brother loves this too. He likes dark hero movies. They seem villainous but they aren\'t. It\'s great. :)

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My favorite Hollywood English movie series is \'Batman:Dark Knight\' series.

>> My favorite Hollywood English movie series is the \"Batman: Dark Knight\" series.

I like dark hero movies, and especially I like the movies like Batman series.

>> I like dark hero movies, especially the Batman series.

I can think about a lot of things by watching those dark hero movies, and I also like the dark mood of those movies.

>> I can think about a lot of things by watching those dark hero movies, and I also like the dark mood of it.

And also I like the movie director of \'Batman:Dark Knight\' series.

>> I also like the director of it.

That\'s why my favorite Hollywood English movie series is \'Batman:Dark Knight\' series.

>> That\'s why it\'s my favorite.

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