What is your favorite English word and why?

2012-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 karen

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Hi karen.^^ Your feedback totally mesmerized me.I am satisfied with your class. It makes me have courage to speak English..I am very thanksful to your information,considerations and kindness.^^In the next class. I want to talk about free topic which is vacation. After that,I want to answer to the three question about travel.Sorry to bother you. When I listen to the pop music(Mariah-carey) The title of music is Hero. That's why My favorite English word is Hero. "If you look inside your heart .You don't have to be afraid of what you are. There's an answer. If you reach into your soul and the sorrow that you know will melt away." or Dreams are hard to follow. But don't let anyone tear them away And there will be tomorrow and in time You'll find the way." The words of a song makes me impressed. I often listen to music when I feel depressed and bad.That is what I want to listen. I love to the words of a popsong especially.Music is a kind of tool which can keep me motivated.

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A fantastic weekend to you Ms.[이름] [이름]!

I hope that you are enjoying your weekend. Thank you very much for your compliment. It\'s making me blush >.< haha. I do feel inspired knowing that you are very passionate about learning. Self improvement knows no age ~__~ I learned this from you. You taught me to chase whatever dream I may have and not let any setbacks stop me from trying again. Thank you for your wonderful homework. I do agree that the song \"Hero\" is such an inspiring song. I don\'t really have a favorite word but I am inspired by the word \"Resilience\". I think our ability to recover from adversity makes us stronger and more beautiful. 

\"The human bone is strengthens under pressure but breaks when barely put to use\".

Anyway, enjoy your Sunday and take care! 

~t.Karen (>.^__^<)

Hi karen.^^

>> Correct sentence: Hi Karen. ^^ 

>> ** Your grammar is correct but please remember to capitalize the first letter of names. Example: Andy, Sally and Joshua.
Your feedback totally mesmerized me.

>> Correct! ^^ 

I am satisfied with your class. 

>> Correct! ^^

It makes me have courage to speak English..

>> Correct! ^^ 

or 

>> Alternative sentence: It gives me the courage to speak English. 

I am very thanksful to your information,considerations and kindness.^^

>> Correct sentence: I am very thankful for your shared information, consideration and kindness. 

>> ** Be careful with your spelling: \"Thankful\".

>> ** The thought would be complete if you use the word \"Shared\". 

>> ** Use the preposition \"to\" to refer to persons. Example: a) I am thankful to James. On the other hand, use the preposition \"for\" to point out things given or done by people. Example: I am thankful for Jame\'s cooperation.  

In the next class. I want to talk about free topic which is vacation.

>> Correct sentence: In the next class I want to talk about \"Vacation\". 

or 

>> Alternative sentence: In the next class I want to have free talking about \"Vacation\".

>> ** Combine your sentences because \"In the next class\" has an incomplete thought. 

>> ** \"Talk about\" and \"Free talking about\" something means the same thing, so don\'t combine them. 

After that,I want to answer to the three question about travel.

>> Correct sentence: After that, I want to answer the three questions about travel. 

>> ** Since \"Three questions\" is plural (more than one) use the plural form of the noun: \"Questions\". If you are talking about one thing (singular), you don\'t need to use the plural form of the word. Examples:

a. She wore a sweater because it was too cold. ----Singular 

b. She wore 2 sweaters because it was too cold.  ---Plural 

Sorry to bother you.

>> Correct! ^^
When I listen to the pop music(Mariah-carey) The title of music is Hero. 

>> Correct sentence: I listened to the song entitled \"Hero\". 

or 

>> Alternative sentence: I listened to the song sung by Mariah Cary entitled \"Hero\". 

>> ** Cause and Effect ---- If you use the word \"When\" it should be followed by a statement serving as the \"Effect\" or consequence. Your sentence above is incomplete. Examples: 

a. When I eat kimchi, I feel happy. ---- \"When I eat kimchi\" is the \"Cause\" or the reason, while \"I feel happy\" is the \"Effect\" or consequence. 

b. I cried when he hit me. ---- \"When he hit me\" is the \"Cause\" or the reason, while \"I cried\"   is the \"Effect\" or consequence. 

>> ** Enclose titles in quotation marks. Examples: 

a. \"Romantico\" by Tete.

b. \"Back in Time\" by Lyn. 

c. \"Fantastic Baby\" by BigBang. 

That\'s why My favorite English word is Hero.

>> Correct sentence: That is why my favorite English word is \"Hero\". 

>> ** Actually your grammar is correct! Just remember that you do not need to capitalize the first letter of the word \"My\" because it is not a proper noun. You will only capitalize the first letter a word if:

1.It is the first word in a sentence. Example: Her hair is long. 

2. It is a proper noun. Example: Jessica went to Norway.

3. It is the pronoun \"I\". Example: Harry and I will go on a date tomorrow. 

\"If you look inside your heart .You don\'t have to be afraid of what you are. There\'s an answer. If you reach into your soul and the sorrow that you know will melt away.\" or Dreams are hard to follow. But don\'t let anyone tear them away And there will be tomorrow and in time You\'ll find the way.\"

>> Correct grammar! 

>> ** Don\'t forget to put an open quotation mark [ \" ] before the word \"Dreams\". 

The words of a song makes me impressed.

>> Correct sentence: The words of this song impress me. 

>> ** Use \"This\" instead of the article \"A\". You can use the article \"A\" if you are talking about a non-specific song.
I often listen to music when I feel depressed and bad.

>> Correct! ^^ 

That is what I want to listen.

>> Correct sentence: This is what I want to listen to. 
I love to the words of a popsong especially.

>> Correct sentence: I especially love the words of a pop song. 

>> ** Usually, adverbs would come first followed by an adjective, verb or another adverb. Example:

a. She sometimes (adv) cry (verb) at night. 

b. What a fantastically (adv) beautiful (adj) day!

Music is a kind of tool which can keep me motivated.

>> Correct sentence: Music is a kind of tool which can keep me motivated. 

>> ** Use the article \"A\" since you are talking about only one tool. 

 

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