What is your favorite family gathering?

2025-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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My favorite family gathering is meeting my daughter and son in law. They live in L.A. They are in a Ph.D program at the university, so they are very busy. I can not often see them. To meet them is very precious to me.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jane!

Truly, being all together is a precious gift that all parents want with their children once they turn adults and have their own families. I hope that you and your daughter and son-in-law will get the chance to meet again soon.

Congratulations for getting all the sentences perfectly! Some nouns have hyphens (-) because it is a three-word compound noun that functions as a single unit.

See you in class soon.

-T. Donna~

My favorite family gathering is meeting my daughter and son in law.
>>My favorite family gathering is meeting my daughter and son-in-law. Correct!

They live in L.A. They are in a Ph.D program at the university, so they are very busy. I can not often see them.
>> Correct!

To meet them is very precious to me.
>> Correct!

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