What is your favorite flavor of chip?
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There are many kinds of good flavor of chips, but my favorite flavor of chip is fried chicken flavor. The first reason is because I’m crazy about fried chicken. When I eat the chips I can feel like eating fried chicken anytime, anywhere with a little money. The second reason is when I eat it with dipping sauce like ketchup or mustard, that makes the taste owesome. But the thing is it makes my belly a bit chubby.
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There are many kinds of good flavor of chips, but my favorite flavor of
chip is fried chicken flavor. The first reason is because I’m crazy
about fried chicken. When I eat the chips I can feel like eating fried
chicken anytime, anywhere with a little money. The second reason is
when I eat it with dipping sauce like ketchup or mustard, that makes the
taste owesome. But the thing is it makes my belly a bit chubby.
>> There are many kinds of good flavor of chips, but my favorite flavor of
chip is fried chicken flavor. The first reason is because I’m crazy
about fried chicken. When I eat the chips I can feel like eating a fried
chicken anytime, anywhere with a little money. The second reason is
when I eat it with dipping sauce like ketchup or mustard, it makes the
taste awesome. But the thing is it makes my belly a bit chubby.
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