What is your favorite food to eat at the beach
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My favorite food to eat at the beach is “hawche”
It is a food that is made with cutted watermelons shape of cubic, other can fruits, and sprite
And we put ices on it
It is very cool and delicious
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My favorite food to eat at the beach is “hawche”
It is a food that is made with cutted watermelons shape of cubic, other can fruits, and sprite
And we put ices on it
It is very cool and delicious
>> My favorite food to eat at the beach is called “Hawche”.
It is a food that is made with cutted watermelons shape of cubic, other can fruits, and sprite
>> It is made of cubed watermelons, canned fruits, and Sprite.
And we put ices on it
>> And we put a lot of ice in it.
It is very cool and delicious
>> It is very cool and delicious!
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Wow! I\'d have to say that I must try this \"Hawche\"!
It sounds so delicious and perfect for a hot day at the beach indeed!
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~ T. Louise ♥♥
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