What is your favorite food? Why?
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I like seafood that have less fat and good taste. Eventually, If I eat some meats I don\'t feel good in my stomach but the taste is good.
That\'s why, I like seafood more than meats. And I also like the most fruits. Because of sweet taste.
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Hi, [이름]!
3. That\'s why, I like seafood more than meats.
Thank you for answering your homework!
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Here are things to consider:
1. I like seafood that have less fat and good taste.
>>CORRECT!
2. Eventually, If I eat some meats I don\'t feel good in my stomach but the taste is good.
>>Eventually, If I eat some meat, I don\'t feel good in my stomach, but the taste is good.
3. That\'s why, I like seafood more than meats.
>>That\'s why, I like seafood more than meat.
4. And I also like the most fruits. Because of sweet taste.
>>Also, I like most fruits because of their sweet taste.
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