What is your favorite food? Why?

2020-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

학생이 쓴 원문

These days, I really like Tteokbokki and spaghetti. First, Tteokbokki is Korean food which is a little bit spicy and sweet. It is really delicious and easy to eat. There are lots of restaurants that sells Tteokbokki and other foods. And also, Tteokbokki is made of rice cake so it feels like you ar eating rice. Second favorite food is spaghetti. Spaghetti is made of nnodles and sauce. It is Italian food and is selled in lots of restaurants. I like both Tteokbokki and spaghetti because they are very delicious!

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These days, I really like Tteokbokki and spaghetti. 
>>CORRECT
OR>>I\'m into Tteokbokki and spaghetti these days.

First, Tteokbokki is Korean food which is a little bit spicy and sweet. 
>>CORRECT

It is really delicious and easy to eat. 
>>CORRECT

There are lots of restaurants that sells Tteokbokki and other foods. 
>>There are lots of restaurants that sell Tteokbokki and other foods.

And also, Tteokbokki is made of rice cake so it feels like you ar eating rice. 
>>Also, Tteokbokki is made of rice cakes so it feels like you are eating rice.

Second favorite food is spaghetti. 
>>My second favorite food is spaghetti.

Spaghetti is made of nnodles and sauce. 
>>Spaghetti is made of pasta and sauce.

It is Italian food and is selled in lots of restaurants. 
>>It is an Italian food and is sold in lots of restaurants.

I like both Tteokbokki and spaghetti because they are very delicious!
>>CORRECT

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