What is your favorite footwear brand?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite shoe brand is Toms.
They have selected \"ONE FOR ONE\" as their brand philosophy.
It means that when a pair of shoes is sold, a pair of shoes will be donated to children in need.
I love their philosophy, and I also was able to have a dream due to them.
I dreamed that I will establish my own company to help people in need like Toms.
Not only that, I love their simple design and comfortable shoes.
This is why I like Toms most among the shoe brands.
강사 첨삭
Hi Chloe!
TOMS brand has a very practical goal. The owner must be really good-hearted.
Here are my corrections.
My favorite shoe brand is Toms. They have selected \"ONE FOR ONE\" as their brand philosophy.
>> Correct!
It means that when a pair of shoes is sold, a pair of shoes will be donated to children in need.
>> Correct!
I love their philosophy, and I also was able to have a dream due to them.
>>I love their philosophy, and I was able to have a dream because of them, too.
I dreamed that I will establish my own company to help people in need like Toms. Not only that, I love their simple design and comfortable shoes.
>> Correct!
This is why I like Toms most among the shoe brands.
>> This is why I like Toms the most among other shoe brands.
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