What is your favorite foreign food, and why do you like it? Do you have any information about that f
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I have gone many country. They have them\'s foods. I feel something was very delicious. But I could\'t eat something. For example I couldn\'t eat coriander in China. It feel likes cosmetics. And when I went to africa, I couldn\'t eat their foods. Because they smelled something weird. I like foreign foods without this foods. But I feel not that special. Because I can eat it here. I didn\'t go India, but I like curry and Naan. Sometimes my family go India restaurant. There is India chef, he made us curry. I feel very delicious.
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Ms. [Name]!
How are you? I appreciate your effort in expressing your thoughts through writing.
There are certain foods that we really enjoy. In my case, I love Korean and other Asian foods. I am curious about Turkey\'s baklava ( It is one of their famous dessert). I hope I will be able to try it one time.
See you in class!
Aki~
I have gone many country.
>>> I have gone to many countries.
They have them\'s foods.
>>> They have their traditional foods
I feel something was very delicious. But I could\'t eat something.
>>> Some are delicious, but there are foods that I couldn\'t eat
For example I couldn\'t eat coriander in China. It feel likes cosmetics.
>>> For example, I couldn\'t eat coriander in China because it tastes like cosmetics.
And when I went to africa, I couldn\'t eat their foods. Because they smelled something weird.
>>> And when I went to Africa, I couldn\'t eat their food either because it smelled weird.
I like foreign foods without this foods. But I feel not that special. Because I can eat it here. I didn\'t go India, but I like curry and Naan.
>>> I like foreign foods without these foods, but I don\'t feel that special. because I can eat it here. I don\'t need to go to India to have curry and Naan, which I like.
Sometimes my family go India restaurant. There is India chef, he made us curry. I feel very delicious.
>>> Sometimes my family goes to an Indian restaurant. There is an Indian chef, he made us curry and it tastes very delicious.
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