What is your favorite foreign food? How is it different from your country’s cuisine?

2021-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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My favorite foreign foods are hamburger and steak. My favorite foreign desserts are croissant and macaroon. Because the stake is chewy and the hamburger is very delicious. Next the crowasa is very sweet and yummy. The macaroon is crunch and smooth. This foods are makes to be by oven.

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Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy the weekend! :)

~ T. Tricia

My favorite foreign foods are hamburger and steak.
>> My favorite foreign foods are hamburgers and steak.

My favorite foreign desserts are croissant and macaroon.
>> CORRECT!

Because the stake is chewy and the hamburger is very delicious.
>> Because the steak is chewy and the hamburger is very delicious.

Next the crowasa is very sweet and yummy.
>> And also, the croissant is very sweet and yummy.

The macaroon is crunch and smooth.
>> The macaroon is crunchy and smooth.

This foods are makes to be by oven.
>> These foods are oven baked.

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