What is your favorite foreign food? How is it different from your country\'s cui[이름]e?

2024-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Well, all of the meats about foreign foods including pork, beef, chicken, and fish I love. [이름]ce I\'m not a picky eater, I can try to eat anything else without the cow\'s intestine. My favorite Aussie\'s food is Kangaroo meat. It tastes like beef. But, it\'s more soft and juice than beef. That\'s different from my country\'s beef. And, another different thing is cost. Aussie\'s meats are more reasonable than other countries. So, I could try it everyday. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Well, all of the meats about foreign foods including pork, beef, chicken, and fish I love. 
>> Well,  I love all kinds of meat, even meat from foreign countries including pork, beef, chicken, and fish. 
[이름]ce I\'m not a picky eater, I can try to eat anything else without the cow\'s intestine. 
>> CORRECT!
My favorite Aussie\'s food is Kangaroo meat. 
>> CORRECT!
It tastes like beef. 
>> CORRECT!
But, it\'s more soft and juice than beef. 
>> But, it\'s softer and juicier than beef. 
That\'s different from my country\'s beef. 
>> CORRECT!
And, another different thing is cost. 
>> And, another different thing is the cost. 
Aussie\'s meats are more reasonable than other countries. 
>> CORRECT!
So, I could try it everyday. :)
>> CORRECT!

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