What is your favorite gadget?
학생이 쓴 원문
The thing I love is robot vacuum cleaner that moves around the room.
After vacuuming, it starts mopping.
I have a cat, and when the cat walks around after taking a pee, the floor is full of sand footprints because a cat always pees on the sand.
So, robot cleaner is essential.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Kevin!
This is a must have gadget! I want to have one. We have so many gadgets around nowadays. They make life more efficient and comfortable for us.
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>> Correct!
After vacuuming, it starts mopping.
>> Correct!
I have a cat, and when the cat walks around after taking a pee, the floor is full of sand footprints because a cat always pees on the sand.
>> Correct!
So, robot cleaner is essential.
>> Correct!
Or: So, the robot cleaner is essential.
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