What is your favorite hobby and why?
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I\'m pretty sure my favorite hobby is to play bowling that you\'ve known already. Except for that, I\'d love to talk about another hobby which is to read the comic. As far as you\'re concerned, my English name is from the main character of Fullmetal Alchemist. Also, I love watching animation such as One-Piece, Naruto, Slam Dunk, Attack on Titan, etc. If I have a chance to watch the Demon Slayer with you, I want to try it. :)
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Wonderful day to you, Elic! You are smarter than you think; stronger than you can ever imagine, all you need is to go for that dream. Start today and you will reach the destination.
I\'m pretty sure my favorite hobby is to play bowling that you\'ve known already.
>>> I\'m pretty sure my favorite hobby is to play bowling, as you know already.
Except for that, I\'d love to talk about another hobby which is to read the comic.
>>> Except for that, I\'d love to talk about another hobby, which is to read comics.
As far as you\'re concerned, my English name is from the main character of Fullmetal Alchemist.
>>> CORRECT.
Also, I love watching animation such as One-Piece, Naruto, Slam Dunk, Attack on Titan, etc.
>>> Also, I love watching animation such as One-Piece, Naruto, Slam Dunk, Attack on Titan, etc.
If I have a chance to watch the Demon Slayer with you, I want to try it. :)
>>> If I have a chance to watch The Demon Slayer with you, I want to try it. :)
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