What is your favorite holiday and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite holiday is Halloween ,Chiristmas ,moon festival and new years day.
Hallooween is spooky.
And Chiristmas is having a gift.
And a Moon festival is .
And lasly New years day is fun too.
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HOMEWORK:
What is your favorite holiday and why?
My favorite holiday is Halloween ,Chiristmas , moon festival and new years day.
>> My favorite holidays are Halloween,Christmas , Moon festival and New Years day.
Hallooween is spooky.
>> CORRECT (Hallooween)
And Chiristmas is having a gift.
>> CORRECT (Christmas)
OR
>> And Christmas is receiving and giving gifts.
And a Moon festival is .
>> And Moon festival is fun .
And lasly New years day is fun too.
>> CORRECT (And lastly New Year\'s day is fun too)
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