What is your favorite holiday? Has your favorite holiday changed since you were a kid?
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My favorite holiday is Christmas because I love the atmosphere and decoration of Christmas. In Christmas season, Carol comes from every street and the decoration of building is very beautiful. All of things about Christmas make me excited and happy.
My favorite holiday was Children\'s Day when I was a kid. On that day, I could receive some gifts from my parents or relatives. Also, If felt like the day was only for me. But, it was changed to Christmas since I was over 20 years. Cause I\'m not kid anymore, I don\'t feel special things on Children\'s Day.
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My favorite holiday is Christmas because I love the atmosphere and decoration of Christmas.
>> My favorite holiday is Christmas because I love the atmosphere and decorations it brings.
In Christmas season, Carol comes from every street and the decoration of building is very beautiful.
>> In the Christmas season, carol comes from every street and the decoration of the buildings are very beautiful.
All of things about Christmas make me excited and happy.
>> All of the things about Christmas make me excited and happy.
My favorite holiday was Children\'s Day when I was a kid. On that day, I could receive some gifts from my parents or relatives.
>> My favorite holiday is Children\'s Day when I was a kid. On that day, I could receive some gifts from my parents or relatives.
Also, If felt like the day was only for me.
>> Also, I felt like that day was only for me.
But, it was changed to Christmas since I was over 20 years.
>> But, it was changed to Christmas since I hit 20\'s and so on.
Cause I\'m not kid anymore, I don\'t feel special things on Children\'s Day.
>> Because I\'m no longer a kid, I don\'t feel special on Children\'s Day anymore.
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