What is your favorite holiday memory?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite memory was Christmas day.
Before I got married, I always enjoyed the Christmas day with my family in a church.
We attended the special event such as cantata(a kind of music performance), street missions and so on. And then, we had family gathering in the evening.
Those were good memories for me forever.
After I got married, I was having a special party with my lovely wife and children.
We always buy the cake and have a party for christmas day.
Now and forever Christmas day will be my favorite and best day for me.
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>>My favorite holiday memory is Christmas Day.
Before I got married, I always enjoyed the Christmas day with my family in a church.
>>Before I got married, I always enjoyed Christmas day with my family in a church.
We attended the special event such as cantata(a kind of music performance), street missions and so on. And then, we had family gathering in the evening.
>>We usually attend special events such as the cantata(a kind of music performance), the street missions and so on. After that, we had family gathering in the evening.
Those were good memories for me forever.
>>For me, those were the good memories that I will treasure forever.
After I got married, I was having a special party with my lovely wife and children.
>>After I got married, we had a special party with my lovely wife and children.
We always buy the cake and have a party for christmas day.
>>We always buy a cake and have a party on Christmas day.
Now and forever Christmas day will be my favorite and best day for me
>>Now and forever, Christmas days will always be my favorite and the best day for me.
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