What is your favorite holiday? Why?

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My favorite holiday is Christmas. Because I can get present, and if it is lucky, it can snow. 

>> My favorite holiday is Christmas because I can get a present, and if I\'m lucky, it will snow. 

I wish every Christmas is a White Christmas, because I like to play with snow. 

>> I wish every Christmas is a white Christmas because I like to play with snow. 

And I miss the turkey. It taste very good. I looked like a big chicken. 

>> I also miss eating turkey, it looks like a big chicken and it tastes very good. 

Teacher told me that I will get sleepy after eating turkey, but I was not sleepy at all. 

>> Teacher told me that I will feel sleepy after eating turkey, but I was not sleepy at all. 

My second favorite holiday is a children\'s day. But now, it was my favorite holiday. Because after I became Middle schooler, my mom told me that I am not a children anymore.

>> My second favorite holiday is Children\'s Day, but now, it was my favorite holiday because after I became a middle schooler, my mom told me that I am not a child anymore.