What is your favorite holiday? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many holidays in Korea such as New year’s day, National foundation day, Armed forces day, Chuseok, and so on.
Every holiday takes each special means
But my favorite holiday is not a national holiday but company’s anniversary.
Why? Because I can enjoy freedom because my wife doesn’t know when company anniversary is.
강사 첨삭
Hello Joey, your answer is really fun to read. I like how you gave specific examples of Korean holidays and then added a humorous twist at the end with your personal favorite holiday. That personal touch makes your writing unique and memorable.
I made some corrections to capitalization and phrasing. For example, holiday names like “New Year’s Day” and “National Foundation Day” should always be capitalized. I also changed “takes each special means” to “has its own special meaning,” which is the more natural way to say it in English.
I really appreciate how you express your thoughts openly and even add humor to your writing. This not only shows your understanding of the language but also your personality, which makes your sentences lively and engaging. Keep up this kind of expressive writing. It’s an excellent way to grow your fluency.
~ T. Lia
There are many holidays in Korea such as New year’s day, National foundation day, Armed forces day, Chuseok, and so on.
>> There are many holidays in Korea such as New Year’s Day, National Foundation Day, Armed Forces Day, Chuseok, and so on.
Every holiday takes each special means
>> Every holiday has its own special meaning.
But my favorite holiday is not a national holiday but company’s anniversary.
>> But my favorite holiday is not a national holiday but my company’s anniversary.
Why? Because I can enjoy freedom because my wife doesn’t know when company anniversary is.
>> Why? Because I can enjoy my freedom since my wife doesn’t know when the company’s anniversary is.
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