What is your favorite kind of car? Why?

2020-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Ysabelle

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I want to big size sedan cars Becouse of if I have an accidant happens opposite cars I think I have protected other cars Even if I have to pay a lot of money I will get big size sedan~~~ But I don`t get concept cars Because of it`s a very noise

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I want to big size sedan cars

>>I want to buy big sedan cars.

Becouse of if I have an accidant happens opposite cars

>> Accidents may happen to other cars.

I think I have protected other cars

>>I think I will be protected from other cars.

Even if I have to pay a lot of money

>> CORRECT

I will get big size sedan~~~

>>I will get a big sedan car.

But I don`t get concept cars

>> I don\'t like getting concept cars.

Because of it`s a very noise

>> They are very noisy.

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