What is your favorite kind of car? Why?
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I prefer two different kind of car. First, Super car which can enjoy speed. This is because my mom and I enjoy speed so we usually point 190 speed on high way. And the other reason is sound of car. The sound of car is very char[이름]g to me. It is really different sound with motorcycle or got tuned car. Sports car covered with unique color was my first dream car. Second, I like SUV. Few years ago, I never thought about SUV, but my photo accademy teacher said “Photographer usually use SUV car because of carting many equipments. That was the point I think SUV again. And I saw the picture of SUV that Kylie Jenner owned. I feel it was cool. So past few years that car was my second dream car, but Korea actor died in that car so I have another think about it. My mom changed car to SUV, because of sharing with me. I think SUV Is really useful. That is why many luggage can be accepted. Someday I can make money I want buy SUV and I have enough money to enjoy my life then I want to buy supercar for
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Hello there Kayla!
Thank you for sharing your ideas!
I really appreciate that you were able to share your thoughts.
I hope you have a great day!
>>I prefer two different kinds of cars.
First, Super car which can enjoy speed.
>>First, I like super cars because I enjoy their speed.
This is because my mom and I enjoy speed so we usually point 190 speed on high way.
>>My mom and I usually enjoy driving fast and we even drive up to 190 kph on the high way.
And the other reason is sound of car.
>>The other reason is the sound of the car.
The sound of car is very char[이름]g to me.
>>The sound of the car is very char[이름]g for me.
It is really different sound with motorcycle or got tuned car.
>>It really differs from the sound of the motorcycle or a tuned car.
Sports car covered with unique color was my first dream car.
>>My first dream car was a sports car with a unique color.
Second, I like SUV.
>>Second, I like SUVs.
Few years ago, I never thought about SUV, but my photo accademy teacher said “Photographer usually use SUV car because of carting many equipments.
>>A few years ago, I never thought about getting an SUV, but my photo academy teacher said that photographers use an SUV to carry many equipment.
That was the point I think SUV again.
>>That was when I thought about getting an SUV again.
And I saw the picture of SUV that Kylie Jenner owned.
>>I saw the picture of the SUV that Kylie Jenner owned.
I feel it was cool.
>>I feel like it was cool.
So past few years that car was my second dream car, but Korea actor died in that car so I have another think about it.
>>So, after a few years, that was my second dream car but a Korean actor died in that same car so I have to think about it.
My mom changed car to SUV, because of sharing with me.
>>My mom changed her car to an SUV and she likes sharing it with me.
I think SUV Is really useful.
>>I think SUVs are really useful.
That is why many luggage can be accepted.
>>That is why it can carry a lot of luggage.
Someday I can make money I want buy SUV and I have enough money to enjoy my life then I want to buy supercar for
>> Someday, when I make enough money, I want to buy an SUV and enjoy life and but a super car.
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