what is your favorite kind of food? Describe it and explain why it is your favorite.

2017-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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My favorite kind of food is raw fish. There are two reasons why I like it. The first reason is that it is good for health. Raw fish has unsaturated fat, so it helps me protect some diseas. Another reason is that whenever I eat it, I can feel like I'm in my hometown. There is a sea in my hometown, so I've eatten it for a long time. Therefor, this taste is familiar for me. In conclusion, I enjoy eating raw fish for these reasons.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for being consistently diligent. Just keep on practicing and always think of your goal to motivate you to study harder. You can do it!

~Kelly^^

My favorite kind of food is raw fish.

>> Correct.

There are two reasons why I like it.

>> Correct.
The first reason is that it is good for health.

>> The first reason is that it is good for the health.

Raw fish has unsaturated fat, so it helps me protect some diseas.

>> Raw fish has unsaturated fat, which protects my body from diseases.

>> or: Raw fish has unsaturated fat that protects us against free radical damage that leads to diseases.
Another reason is that whenever I eat it, I can feel like I\'m in my hometown.

>> Correct.

There is a sea in my hometown, so I\'ve eaten it for a long time.

>> Correct.

Therefor, this taste is familiar for me.

>> Correct.
In conclusion, I enjoy eating raw fish for these reasons.

>> Correct.

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