what is your favorite kind of food? Describe it and explain why it is your favorite.
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My favorite kind of food is raw fish.
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There are two reasons why I like it.
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The first reason is that it is good for health.
>> The first reason is that it is good for the health.
Raw fish has unsaturated fat, so it helps me protect some diseas.
>> Raw fish has unsaturated fat, which protects my body from diseases.
>> or: Raw fish has unsaturated fat that protects us against free radical damage that leads to diseases.
Another reason is that whenever I eat it, I can feel like I\'m in my hometown.
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There is a sea in my hometown, so I\'ve eaten it for a long time.
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Therefor, this taste is familiar for me.
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In conclusion, I enjoy eating raw fish for these reasons.
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