What is your favorite Korean traditional game? Explain how this game is played.
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite Korean traditional game is tug-of-war because it is push and pull game. So, I can feel the thrill. But if I don\'t focus on the game, the possibility which my team win will be unlikely so, I have to concentrate on it. Another reason which I like is It is easy to play the game. Firstly, you have to wear gloves to protect your hands. Secondly, you should stand by the rope. Thirdly, you should hold the rope. Finally, you should pull it. It is a game which many people can play and enjoy together.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kimberly:)
I\'ve seen that game before. It was one of the games in the movie, \"Squid Game\". It\'s very interesting I must say. :)
My favorite Korean traditional game is tug-of-war because it is push and pull game.
>>My favorite Korean traditional game is tug-of-war because it is a push and pull game.
So, I can feel the thrill.
>> I can usually the thrill through this game.
But if I don\'t focus on the game, the possibility which my team win will be unlikely so, I have to concentrate on it.
>> CORRECT
Another reason which I like is It is easy to play the game.
>> Another reason why I like it is because it is easy to play.
Firstly, you have to wear gloves to protect your hands.
>> CORRECT
Secondly, you should stand by the rope.
>> Second, you have to stand by the rope.
Thirdly, you should hold the rope.
>> Third, you should hold the rope.
Finally, you should pull it.
>> CORRECT
It is a game which many people can play and enjoy together
>> It is a game where many people can play and enjoy it together.
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