What is your favorite Korean traditional game? Explain how this game is played.

2022-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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My favorite Korean traditional game is Ddangddaemokgi. It is the game that I have to capture more lands than other players. I can capture some lands from other players, and other players can do so. I\'ve done this when I was a kid with my friends and cousins, but now, I don\'t remember the rule exactly. But I remember that it was really fun and I\'ve done this a lot when I was a kid. My parents taught me the way how I do it. And my parents told me that they also have done it when they were kids.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:) 

I\'ve seen that game before in a Korean drama that I\'ve watched before. It\'s very interesting I must say. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

My favorite Korean traditional game is Ddangddaemokgi.
>> My favorite Korean traditional game is \"Ddangddaemokgi\".

It is the game that I have to capture more lands than other players.
>> It is the game where I have to capture more lands than the other players.

I can capture some lands from other players, and other players can do so.
>> I can capture some lands from other players, and the other players can do so too. 

I\'ve done this when I was a kid with my friends and cousins, but now, I don\'t remember the rule exactly.
>> CORRECT

But I remember that it was really fun and I\'ve done this a lot when I was a kid.
>> CORRECT

My parents taught me the way how I do it.
>> MY parents taught me how to do it. 

And my parents told me that they also have done it when they were kids.
>> CORRECT

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