What is your favorite month and why?

2021-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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January is my favorite month. First, in January, there is my birthday. I think everyone loves their own birthday, and so am I, I love my birthday. Second, I love winter. I think its better to go to Artic than going to desert. I am good at going to cold place, but I am bad at going to hot place. So, I like January the most.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! We have months that are more special to us than others. We celebrate certain occasions that we find interesting for us. Thanks for sharing yours :)

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January is my favorite month.

>>CORRECT

First, in January, there is my birthday.

>> First, January is my birth month.

I think everyone loves their own birthday, and so am I, I love my birthday.

>> I think everyone loves their own birthday so I do to.

Second, I love winter.

>>CORRECT

I think its better to go to Artic than going to desert.

>> I think its better to go to the Artic than going to the desert.

I am good at going to cold place, but I am bad at going to hot place.

>> I feel good when I go to cold places, but I feel bad when I go to hot places.

So, I like January the most.

>> CORRECT

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