What is your favorite mood? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite mood is a delight because I wish to give a happiness of being with me to surrounding people. If they are happy, then I can get energy from it.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Judy!
Truly, delight is an exciting feeling of inspiration and motivation. Moreover, it contains energy and power. Then, being with these people empowers you as well. If you are one, then people around you are lucky to have you.
Kindly go over my grammar suggestions. They have to do with the use of the article \'a\'. Read them carefully. Well done!
See you tomorrow!
-T. Donna
My favorite mood is a delight because I wish to give a happiness of being with me to surrounding people.
>> My favorite mood is delight because I wish to give happiness of being with me to people surrounding me.
If they are happy, then I can get energy from it.
>> If they are happy, then I can get energy from them and vice versa.
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